well there's one I've read recently, not sure if you've already known. "Undefeated", you don't get to pick though. but eventually there will be 2 guys go home with u :)
This was really fun! I like how different Trevor and David are, and that both are very kind and loving to Chris. For your first foray into VN's, this was paced really well and I loved having several settings throughout the game.
This was really good! 😁 I’m honestly not one for shorter VNs, but I’m so glad that I took a chance on this one, because xou did not disappoint in any way 😌
The pacing is perfect, and as a writer myself, I know how hard that can be to get right with a shorter stories, so colour me impressed 😋
And hoo boy, those smut scenes were very satisfying! 😍 The one with Trevor was right up my… alley~ 😏
Great job 🙂 I’d love to read more of xour stuff in the future
Thankx! 😁 I’ll be sure to give xour stuff a gander. Seems like xou’ve gotten a lot of practice in before trying xour hand at this VN, which honestly explains a lot 😋
Third Wheel is a fun project that expertly written and paced. From what I understand, Stinkdog is a long time Furry writer and their expertise is plain to see be it during the natural dialogue and the erotic moments.
Two points really stuck out to me, however. First and more important in my view, there's a certain lack of drama or any real conflict with these characters. Everything just goes pretty well regardless of your choices which I think saps a little of the potential this setup has to evoke some feels and explore these characters a little more.
The other thing I found lacking is the use of the "Id" character. In thought, it's a pretty nifty idea, offering a streamlined version of the inner voices of Disco Elysium. However, in execution, its presence never coalesces into anything tangible which I think gives the inclusion an almost gimmicky vibe. Things never come to a head, there's no paralyzing moment where the MC is torn between "logic" and Id; they occasionally trade insults and that's it. It's not enough to worsen the experience, but it did make me feel like something is lacking here.
Third Wheel may be a straightforward story where everything goes right but it's really well made one. I recommend for the craft alone, but it's also good for "playing single-handed" if you catch my drift.
Thank you for the kind review! I wish I had the talent to pull off something with the gravitas of Disco Elysium, but maybe with some more experience, I can revisit the "Id" concept and give it more weight.
I hope you enjoy the third route when I finish it!
While Ren'Py *can* run in a browser, it's rather slow, so downloading it is probably a better experience. Unless that's just the fact that my RAM is pretty low by modern standards.
I'm honestly not certain how to go about doing that, but I'll see if I can figure it out! The game is only 200 MB so it shouldn't be too terribly slow I hope.
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I adore that you get to pick both of them as an option. Not enough romancing games have that option and I want all the boyfriends.
I'm glad you enjoyed it! I felt like a "both" option was the most natural way to go for the third route.
well there's one I've read recently, not sure if you've already known. "Undefeated", you don't get to pick though. but eventually there will be 2 guys go home with u :)
This was really fun! I like how different Trevor and David are, and that both are very kind and loving to Chris. For your first foray into VN's, this was paced really well and I loved having several settings throughout the game.
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I had a lot of fun working on it so I think I'll make similar projects in the future!
This was really good! 😁 I’m honestly not one for shorter VNs, but I’m so glad that I took a chance on this one, because xou did not disappoint in any way 😌
The pacing is perfect, and as a writer myself, I know how hard that can be to get right with a shorter stories, so colour me impressed 😋
And hoo boy, those smut scenes were very satisfying! 😍 The one with Trevor was right up my… alley~ 😏
Great job 🙂 I’d love to read more of xour stuff in the future
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. There will be a third ending in the future. I'm still working diligently on it.
If you'd like to read my other smut, I have galleries on Furaffinity and Sofurry:
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/stinkdog/
https://stinkdog.sofurry.com/
Thankx! 😁 I’ll be sure to give xour stuff a gander. Seems like xou’ve gotten a lot of practice in before trying xour hand at this VN, which honestly explains a lot 😋
Third Wheel is a fun project that expertly written and paced. From what I understand, Stinkdog is a long time Furry writer and their expertise is plain to see be it during the natural dialogue and the erotic moments.
Two points really stuck out to me, however. First and more important in my view, there's a certain lack of drama or any real conflict with these characters. Everything just goes pretty well regardless of your choices which I think saps a little of the potential this setup has to evoke some feels and explore these characters a little more.
The other thing I found lacking is the use of the "Id" character. In thought, it's a pretty nifty idea, offering a streamlined version of the inner voices of Disco Elysium. However, in execution, its presence never coalesces into anything tangible which I think gives the inclusion an almost gimmicky vibe. Things never come to a head, there's no paralyzing moment where the MC is torn between "logic" and Id; they occasionally trade insults and that's it. It's not enough to worsen the experience, but it did make me feel like something is lacking here.
Third Wheel may be a straightforward story where everything goes right but it's really well made one. I recommend for the craft alone, but it's also good for "playing single-handed" if you catch my drift.
Thank you for the kind review! I wish I had the talent to pull off something with the gravitas of Disco Elysium, but maybe with some more experience, I can revisit the "Id" concept and give it more weight.
I hope you enjoy the third route when I finish it!
Would you ever consider making a web version so that the game can be played through the browser?
While Ren'Py *can* run in a browser, it's rather slow, so downloading it is probably a better experience. Unless that's just the fact that my RAM is pretty low by modern standards.
I don't think I've noticed it being slower but that's fair
I'm honestly not certain how to go about doing that, but I'll see if I can figure it out! The game is only 200 MB so it shouldn't be too terribly slow I hope.
You should be able to figure it out from the renpy menu, it's the web button. I appreciate you trying even if it doesn't work out!